the red gummy bear

once the was a little girl called Lilly  who was obsessed with gummy bears especially the red ones when she saw a packet of haribows in the store she always begged her mum to get  them and she always did one day she went to a sweet buffet the table was full of bon bon strawberry laces , coke gummy bottles , rain bow sour strips but no red gummy bears ! she was furious and wanted to complain to the manger this second and did what she needed to do and stormed out of the sweet buffet and threw a tantrum on the floor .

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  1. I loved the story the reason why I loved this was you made it almost like a candy wonder land and I love fantasy story’s like this one . and really think you could improve on maybe making shorter senesces . over than that this story was really nice.

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