The poison end god

One lovely day, in the clouds their lived lots of great gods. The gods loved tea, but wen the king god tried coffee it poisoned him and he was going to die but then he exclaimed to them” fro the cup on to dry land and be c but then it was to lait he had died and we did not no what his last word was but all they no they hat to

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  1. Great story Oscar. I like the idea of all the gods sitting in the clouds drinking tea together. You’re really getting the hang of those conjunctions in your second sentence (but, and, but, and, but, and, but) but try not to use too many in one sentence. Break up really long sentences with the occasional full stop.

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