The Magic Mountain

A long time ago there were two girls called Emily and Freya .They loved climbing  mountains but one day they started climbing a magic mountain. It had two doors so they split up Emily went though the door with brown, melted cholate . Weirdly there was a giraffe and on the top of the giraffe there was a key so she climbed the giraffe and went though the other door but she realised there was a sign.  It said no eating more than ten pieces of sweets.  Freya ate that many sweets so she went to a prison with salty water. Emily rescued Freya with the key.