THE INTERGALACTIC SPACE BOY

Once upon a time there was a 12 year old boy named Daniel .He really wanted to be a space ranger when he grew up .When he was 34 his dream came true and his mission was to get alien space ship samples .His shuttle had a minigunĀ  on each side for protection he also bought a machine gun with him to carry around .All of a sudden he saw a space ship an got the samples and went back to the shuttle but right as he was about to pack up a hord of aliens came charging he killed them and survived.

2 thoughts on “THE INTERGALACTIC SPACE BOY”

  1. Hi Archie, phew! That was a close call, I was a bit worried that he wasn’t going to make it back there. Thank you for this lovely story that shows a bit of creativity in it’s structure. I like the grammar is good with clear sentences but one little thing; when you finish a sentence put the full stop then the space not the other way around. Good work though, well done.

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