moving statues

in a eerie forest there was some static karate sensais master Jim was thinking about arrrrrrrrrrrrg. the static statures wriggled around and turned real, Jim heard it and felt scared. HE FELT THE GROUND SHAKE CCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCRASH!!!!!!!!! SUDDUNLY ALL OF THE TREES FELL DOWN WHILE JIM RUNED UNDER THEM. THE STATUES found clues were Jim was.  Jim was running the amulet fell off! Jim didn’t notice. the human-statues got it. Jim went out of the forest. He notice  his amulet was gone suddenly a colossal tree fell down and the human stickmen appeared with the amulet but Jim took it off them

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  1. Hi Rory,
    I enjoyed reading your 100 word challenge. You’ve built up suspense well and I really hoped Jim would find his amulet and escape. You’ve included lots of great word choices, but unfortunately have quite a few punctuation errors. Always take the time to check through your writing. Keep up the writing though, you’ve clearly got a great imagination.

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