messi and the strike of wonder

one day there was a footballer called Messi that was playing a football match he was a hero he would a free kick so he wanted to change team but then everything stopped and then it went back to normal he did not know what happened so he carried on and then he signed a contract for Barcelona it was a great and he scored a wonder goal and the crowd went wild.So he celebrated an he was amazed what he just did and he was the best player in the world and he beat Ronaldo and he was amazed.

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  1. Well done! Obviously you are a Messi fan. Create use of description and action in your text. Try to use more punctuation to help the reader with your story.
    Well done!
    Sandrine

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