One sunny day , when the London aquarium was packed full of people. Two very good friends Aj and Finn were being watched playing together . Suddenly, someone fell over Aj couldn’t bear watch the poor child cry the little brown goldfish flew up the ladder slowly. “STOP YOU CAN’T FLY YET.” But he couldn’t hear . PLOT he fell face first on the floor! ERRR

R are you ok said Finn the stingray “err   yeah. ” said Aj. Just then,  a mirical happened he grew arms and legs and flew out and helped him up and back in to his tank. The  END

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  1. Well done on your entry this week Heath. You have shown great imagination in your story. I’m glad the fish made it back to his tank in the end. Keep up the great writing.
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 w/c

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