A Big Christmas Disaster

One cold evening it was five days till christmas. There was two children called Olivia who was nine years of age and Tommy who was sixteen and there mum was a vet she was helping little animals there dad was in war. That day Tommy said “Livie i’m going out with with my friends” When Tommy went. “bye” Olivia said. Tommy went when Olivia was spying on him. When Tommy went down the street to meet his friend him and his friend broke into a red slay and was about to take off but that guy was Santa and shouted ” top thats my slay!!!”

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  1. I liked your story it was fantastic. I like how you used adjectives like one cold evening.
    There was a part at the end it says “top that’s my slay” when its suppost to be stop that’s my sleigh and that’s how you spell sleigh but its still the best story I have heard like the part when they stole the sleigh.

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